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joniWell my first impression was that this was very interesting. I like it. It could become tighter if you lose a lot of the word 'that'. Remember redundancy causes you to lose the avid reader.Also watch for correct punctuation. Capitals after a sentence ends?
Write on! You have a nice tale going here.
Visit my blog often and you'll have this story tightened in no time.
Thanks for visiting as I've enjoyed visiting you.
Joni
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Cool. to the point. I'll be doing the proofreading later. this is just raw. Do you have any idea how I could protect my story although it hasn't been finished yet? thx
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