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Do You Write Poetry or Stories?
Posted by LazarusDrealamant • 8/24/09 • Subscribe to this Discussion [RSS] • Report This Topic
Topics: dark, gothic, litarature, poems, poetry
Would anyone want to consider posting their poems on my blog:
literature-gothic.blogspot.com/
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you had the same idea i did. i'll post to your's if you post to mine.-
Sorry! it's not plagerism, see my Nocturnative blog. I posted the idea before you told me yours!
My poetry is kind of lame, but alright. Should I send mine to your email or post it right here? -
email would be best, but either way is fine. and i'm sure your poetry's not lame at all.
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I'll post it here, but I'm telling you it's a childish poem I wrote.
Well, not a poem, a song. I might upload the music for it later:
The End of Humanity
5:34AM Aug 22nd 2009
Take me home, from this place,
A life that I could never face,
Antisocial and antichrist,
Take the razor your vain is sliced,
My soul is mutilated, my soul is dead,
They always had us, their hunger fed,
There is no meaning to this life,
Just anguish, misery and endless strife,
When we die it's endless thought,
All our life all that we sought,
A distant past for your soul to feel,
A wound so deep it never heals.
One chance is all you ever had,
The truth will drive humanity mad
The government, religion it's all a scam,
If your gonna die, nobody gives a damn,
Cluster phobia in this oppressive tomb,
Never born, still trapped in this womb,
The grass is dead and the sky full of gloom,
The night is black, the wind is slow,
My coffin is rotting, no were left to go,
They'll never understand, They'll never know.
If tomorrow humanity would die,
All the happy people would finally die,
If tomorrow everyone would just die,
It would make one difference to me,
It would put a smile on me,
It would cleanse my soul for me,
It would at last set me free,
When we die it's endless pain
Every second is all the same,
A distant memory for your soul to feel,
A wound so deep it never heals.
One chance is all you ever had,
The truth will drive humanity mad
True love and joy is all a lie,
Why can't humanity just go and die, -
Told you it's lame.
If you would rather email me your peom, my email is lazarus.drealamant@yahoo.co.uk
Give me the link to your page so we can link back.
But atleast I expressed my hatred for humanity :/ -
that wasn't lame at all. the rhyming is fantastic and the hatred for humanity comes across very very very well.
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sorry it took me so long to find this. all the writings on this computer are titled in a code of letters and i forget what i title things as. well, this isn't my best, but the general public isn't ready for my best. the best isn't dark or gothic, but just plain disturbing instead.
--Immortal Love?--
Blood so precious
Seeps from our lives
So long has it been
Since we didn't think of dieing
Thoughts so tainted
Flood our minds
Damages made pain
With all the passing time
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Forever bound by blood
We shall slip away
Into silent oblivion
Together always
Crimson liquid wounds
Combining our hearts
With each slowing beat
We fall further apart
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Separated by death
Shall we meet again?
Eternal love so unassured
Within the timeless oblivion
By dieing shall i fail thee
I beg you for forgiveness
Together forever was my intent
Immortality won't come from weakness. -
I don't think those are bad at all.
I think they are pretty good.
I write poetry and might be willing to send you one.
You can see my work here - on the POETRY SLAM Thread.
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just to be sure, i can post your poem into The Darkest Writings blog??
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