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1. 

   9/14/08

   timethief

   I like haiku but I have to take a rain check. It's dinner time here ie. 5:34 PM. So I'll catch up with you later.

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      9/14/08

      DaneMorgan

      one liner... cool and even in bowing out
      
      (but then you edited... did you realize that what you originally typed was in the parameter?)
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      9/14/08

      timethief

      No
   3. 

      9/14/08

      timethief

      Outside my window
      A pine tree stands very still
      Wild turkey rises
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   9/14/08

   Friday13

   A haiku challenge
   No time for it, really
   I'll go away now

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      9/14/08

      DaneMorgan

      two people,
      they have gone away
      later dudes
3. 

   9/14/08

   Anok

   Barren land with snow,
   The tear nourishes my heart,
   Thoughts of tomorrow.
   
   That was for
   My husband at war
   I missed him.

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      9/14/08

      DaneMorgan

      For what war
      did you await him?
      He is home?
   2. 

      9/14/08

      Anok

      Through the Iraq war
      Awaiting his arrival
      He is safe at home.
4. 

   9/14/08

   fershur

   Don't compromise yourself
   A wise woman once said.
   Journeying through life.

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5. 

   9/14/08

   lulubelleb

   Variations on the Body Meme
   
   My body’s a box
   The packing crate of my mind
   Tariffs will be paid
   
   My body’s a car
   The conveyance of my heart
   Maintenance is scheduled
   
   My body's a fort
   The shield for my foreboding
   Stout walls have been built
   
   My body’s a veil
   The disguise for my true self
   The masque dances on

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6. 

   9/15/08

   Anok

   Skies of silver shine
   Hard winds, put your mind at ease.
   It's early yet, dream.

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7. 

   9/15/08

   SanfordAndersson

   I, too, must beg off
   incapabilitywise
   It seems obvious

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8. 

   9/15/08

   Friday13

   Ken lee
   tulibu dibu douchoo
   ken lee meju more

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9. 

   9/15/08

   Anok

   Warm breezes, Deep oceans,
   Water splashing, taste the salt.
   Summer approaches.

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10. 

    9/15/08

    SanfordAndersson

    There once was a... no
    I have forgotten the form
    My memory fails

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       9/15/08

       ernestlobo

       This does sound fun,
       Just a few words
       a different communication
11. 

    9/15/08

    SanfordAndersson

    Morgan our new friend
    issues an invitation
    Thus speaketh the Dane

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12. 

    9/15/08

    SanfordAndersson

    Wallace Stevens nor
    Robert W. Service
    Not Rumi either

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13. 

    9/15/08

    drjay1966

    No hope of writing
    An acceptable haiku
    Badly clogged drainpipe

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14. 

    9/15/08

    Anok

    Dane is bald
    or so he is called
    Scary Dane.

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       9/15/08

       drjay1966

       Is he the one they
       call the melancholy Dane,
       or that's someone else?
15. 

    9/15/08

    drjay1966

    I'm gonna take this opportunity to give a shout-out to two of my favorite haiku blogs:
    
    haiku-usa.blogspot.com/
    juhatik.blogspot.com/

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16. 

    9/15/08

    SanfordAndersson

    Nation's tapestry
    appearing rent, is stronger
    New thread woven, gold

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17. 

    9/15/08

    SanfordAndersson

    not odder than else
    we came to blog and ended
    up in Haiku-ville

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18. 

    9/15/08

    LGramlich

    Rick Wright has passed on
    To the Great Gig in the Sky
    My heart is eclipsed

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19. 

    9/15/08

    CollettesTreasures

    Oh how the time flies
    When we play the day away
    On blog catalog

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20. 

    9/15/08

    Xight

    Too much work to do
    Yet here I am, thinking of
    another haiku
    
    Spending too much time
    Thinking, writing, making rhymes
    Blame Dane, for this crime.
    
    Why a Haiku Dane?
    Why not Tanka, or Sonnet?
    Easier to do.
    
    Doctor Seuss, Mother Goose
    I think you have knocked a few
    screws in my head loose.
    
    I can not stop now.
    What have you done to me Dane?
    You've made me insane.
    
    =P

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21. 

    9/15/08

    fairchildonrage

    What great post you have,
    Might as well give it a shot.
    Genius am I not?
    
    XD

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22. 

    9/15/08

    fairchildonrage

    It's fun to be here
    Dane you're so awesome, so cheers!
    Then, keep it coming!

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23. 

    9/16/08

    lulubelleb

    Hi. I'm Lulubelle.
    I can count to seventeen.
    Just did it again.

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24. 

    9/16/08

    thinkmaothink

    Oh Em Gee Haiku.
    I'm sorry I suck at it.
    Refrigirator.

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