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New tag line help
Posted by roguedeals • 1/19/09 • Subscribe to this Discussion [RSS] • Report This Topic
Topics: header design, slogan, slogan help, slogan phrase, tag lines
What do you think if I changed my tag line from:
So good, its a steal
To:
tech deals and reviews with personality!
I think its better, but you be the judge and help me 
please.
User Comments
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Lets try this again
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tech deals and reviews with personality! is better, but you'll think of something else in a day or two.
I'm changing my tagline frequently also -
I'm undecided -
I think the new tag line is more descriptive of your blog, but not as catchy. I would recommend leaving the "with personality!" off of the line, if you have to tell someone there's personality, then there probably isn't - people will catch on pretty quickly when looking at your site that you have plenty of personality - you don't need to tell them.
What about "tech deals and reveals"? I'm not sure it quite makes sense, but it's shorter and catchy. -
reveals does fit with the whole rogue bit... hmm should I? ill have to think about it
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wrong spot
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Personality: Deal with it!
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Not bad but a bit harsh, no?
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Hey I just write the copy - you have to decide... laughs
Dealing with Personality
Deals with a Flair
Deals with Personality
Come here - Buy Now
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hey powerkor! what about "reviews by smart people for smart people". Who dares question it? lol, j/k-
haha I appreciate your humor, thanks.
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What for Whom (or for What Benefit) is a great formula. e.g. Copyblogger.com: Copywriting tips for online marketing success. It's gotta hook the reader in.-
Hey Easton,
Whoa there.
Headlines hook the reader in.
Taglines summarize the message like the period at the end of the sentence.
Best,
Rich
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Tech Deals and Reviews for any personality and attitude?
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