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Well, as you can see i am new to the blogging world. I am a writer, not a great one, but then again I am my own worst critic. I've been writing for a number of years, but i decided this is a great time to share my work and hopefully it will help someone else find their voice. Feel free to comment and critique my blog it is a work in progress. Any other newbies feel free to post your blog and together we can learn and grow.
tjefferson85.wordpress.com

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  1. weemundo
    Great writing stuff ! Loved it

    Just one suggestion : Change ur template

    www.ablogwithadifference.com :]
  2. tjefferson85
    thank you for the comment, i will see what i can do about it, still wet behind the ears.
  3. tpvswp
    The template is fine. The centered text is NOT.
  4. hippieprincess4
    I am pretty new also...but I agree with tpvswp...the centered text needs to be fixed...template looks fine to me Good luck with your writing!
    mysouthernhippiemarriedmomoffourlife.blogspot.com/
  5. pbdjones
    I like your writing. You have a very uplifting personable style.

    I tend to avoid italicizing, bolding or centering text too much, on monitors it's hard on the eyes and discourages the reader. You want readers to give your words the attention they deserve.

    Keep up the good work.
    1. keropidark
      I agree, keep the font simple and SANS-serif. It is easier to see on all browsers.
  6. DrowseyMonkey
    Content is good...but the black bacground with bolded white, italicized text - ouch. Same with the neon orange. It's quite hard on the eyes.

    I'd go with something softer, maybe a grey text and not bolded or italicized. Or a lighter background. I'd also stick with one style of text/font rather than changing it for each post.

    Just my 2 cents ... or 3 or 4.
  7. keropidark
    keropidark.blogspot.com
    girlropi.blogspot.com

    Welcome to BC! I find blogging to be one of my favorite hobbies. I think it's cool that you start with a picture to set the theme. Then you express yourself.

    Good work.
  8. tjefferson85
    Thank you all for the comments and critiques. I will try some things out and see what happens. Once again thank you!
  9. ranist22
    Your writing is great, the external aspects are ok and continue writing from the heart! You'll get more ideas as you keep moving on.
  10. Ranu
    I liked your posts, especially "A brand new feeling".
  11. buckrobin
    Your writing is very good and I enjoyed stopping by to read.
  12. DrowseyMonkey
    It looks better now that you switched the colours of the background/text ... but for me I find italicized font hard to read.
  13. katscandles
    I just went to your site, and I love it! I will be back.
    I left you a comment too!
  14. kaguvkov
    Welcome to your blogging experience. You write so well, good luck.
  15. Hangingonahyphen
    Hello. For a newbie, you have good ideas and potentials. I happened to be a newbie myself and I would confess you have a better blog than mine, at least when it comes to presentation. Content-wise, I noticed a few misspelled words here and there, and yes, the italics tend to distract. But I know I would find a much more improved and way better blog in a short time from now. There is plenty of room for this blog to become fabulously great!
  16. tjefferson85
    Thanks to all that have viewed my blog, i am making my rounds to all of your blogs!
  17. gosmelltheflowers
    Great attitude and you write from the heart!

    Good for you tjefferson85! Us flowers applaud ya....

    www.gosmelltheflowers.com
    1. timethief
      The writing is good but I don't understand why you have made the font in all the posts bold.
  18. dynn
    welcome to the new world of sharing informations.
  19. kden
    I really loved your blog. Good going taking out the bold, much easier to follow. And anybody that writes about his mother can't be all bad ;-)
    Keep up the good work.
  20. judysteapot
    Thanks for your thoughts and I agree with one of your previous comments - a son that writes such a moving tribute to his mother must be wonderful
  21. ramintessah
    nice works.keep it coming.i agree to what other people said,maybe try changing the fonts.i am a newbie too.my blog is still under construction.what a term!anyways TAKE CARE. hope to see you arounnd.
    1. timethief
      @ramintessah
      Hello there. tjefferson posted this way back on 9/12/08 and he changed the fonts in September. His blog is a great read so I'm glad you dug this old thread up and visited it.
  22. myteaatom
    Some great reads my friend...will defo be reading more in thre future..stay safe out there.
  23. tjefferson85
    Hey, i thought i'd never see this up here again, lol. Thanks, i appreciate you all coming by my blog! I will do my best to check out our many different works! I will also do my best to keep coming with honest, deep, and writing from my soul!

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