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Please send me your favoured short poems
Posted by AndiBob • 12/22/08 • Subscribe to this Discussion [RSS] • Report This Topic
Topics: art, Culture, friends, poems, short poems
Dear friends,
My name is Andi. I am from Bucharest, Romania.
Please send me your favoured short poems, famous or new...or yours (italian language, french, romanian, english or spanish).
Thank You Kindly
www.andibob.wordpress.com
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here is the poem. vijayanths.blogspot.com/2008/01/it-is-you-my-love-who-else.html. author is about t become famous, hehehe Im the author.
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We can only do that if you tell us what you're going to do with the poem. When I ask for poetry from guest poets, I make a copyright mention in their name and a link to their blog, so that people can continue and read the original blogs the poems featured in. They can be then contacted directly by people interested in their poetry.
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Hi, Suvrokroy ! Happy New Year!
Please read my poem /thanks
andibob.wordpress.com/2008/12/13/poemele-spaniole-psalm/ -
I don't love you
I don't love you because you love me
I don't love you because of anything you do
I just love you because it's you .
Alex Great
(you can do whatever yo u want with it share, sell or barter
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Plurk
On my lips with a smirk
I decided to plurk
or else you may think I'm a jerk
and turn on me berserk
And cause me to irk
and that doesn't work
to plurk is a perk
for us in the murk
who on this platform lurk
like a desperate clerk...
plurk.com/redeemByURL?from_uid=3335635&check=-622238311&s=1 -
AlexGreat
I Don't do anything with your poem, I just enjoy it! And... I take the time to admire your honesty! Thanks.
ekim941 - I am ready to suffer for my poems :))
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I have put a few of my poems on my blog itself-
www.achyutktelang.blogspot.com -
Hi, Achyut Telang! (Please tell me how should I pronounce your name?? pls
Very nice blog you have, congrats! Keep writing poems, I’ll read them...
You can also use more shadows to give a portrait a bit glamour and mistery ...
Excellent work, Achyut!!-
AndiBob,
Ha ha...that's the problem most people face....even in my own country- of pronouncing my name!
The only way I can explain it to you can be like the 'Ach' in my name is just like the starting of the word "a chair" then the 'yut' is like 'you' and 't'. only difference being the 't' is soft not hard but unfortunately in English there is no word with a soft 't'. Hope you got it. And others too!
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And if you want, i will put the link here to my poems for all to see-
1) achyutktelang.blogspot.com/2008/10/poetry-words-from-my-heart.html
2) achyutktelang.blogspot.com/2008/11/poetry-words-from-my-heart-ii.html
3) achyutktelang.blogspot.com/2008/11/poetry-words-from-my-heart-iii.html -
Here's a silly but dark one that I wrote. Copyright me. if you want to use it email me or use the contact form on my site.
Death is a Cardshark
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This is the grim end, as I
Grip the liquid tightly as it seeps
Through the cracks and creases
Dripping, trickle, creep
Pours, splatters, spilling about
Collects, congeals, and dries
Stains on the walls and floor of my soul
My own self-centered demise
Arms and legs fixed and stiff
Post mortem ghostliness
This suffer I've caused
To this dark depth I've plunged
Confusion entwined around
And no way out of this hell I've found
One falling tear from one black hole
Abyss of darkness consumes the soul
Death, when dealt a hand full of spades
The gravekeeper joyously plays...
Unfleshed to bone, his fingers snap
Crack and creek, with each rapping tap
Off the table, the sound of death
A void of echoes, an endless breath -
Powerkor,
I can't honestly say that I enjoyed every word/idea of this dark poem, but ...you have powerful images here.
This poem shows obvious talent, you have created... sensations with very dramatic images: blood mixed with firestorms, a secret battle between... loneliness and despair. I almost can hear The Voice in Darkness
Your metaphor is very strong.
Thank you.
I will not forget this verse:
”A void of echoes, an endless breath” -
My tiny webbed feet are frozen
this isn't the life I'd have chosen
but I am a frog
an' I live in a bog
so what's the use of supposin' -
For Heaven's Sake
For every truth be told, I lie
For every hand I hold, I cry
For every breath I take, I die
For Heaven’s sake, I try
To stay on the path that beckons me.
I draw a line I cannot cross.
If one more step will break my heart.
I could not bear my lover's loss.
If I were you and you were I.
Would love be blind to lights of gray?
Tempted by this heart divided.
I'll faultier not, if shown the way.
Open handed, love line exposed.
On tenterhooks, I comply.
A timeless moment, yet mortal still
For Heaven’s sake, I try -
Hi,Gentledove!
....so what's the use of supposin' that you are a dove?
Alex - Great line!!
KittyKat53
I think you wrote a song here (?)
Thank you, guys! -
Dove,
Do you know a french actress, Isabelle Huppert? You look very much like her:
www.traetta.com/img/malina-05.jpg -
Hi, Arnous81!
I started to laugh, then I decided it s so damn funny and I laughed again
Thanks. You are a Poet now!!!!! -
My favourite is a fragment by John Keats called "This Living Hand"
This living hand, now warm and capable
Of earnest grasping, would, if it were cold
And in the icy silence of the tomb,
So haunt thy days and chill thy dreaming nights
That thou wouldst wish thine own heart dry of blood
So in my veins red life might stream again,
And thou be conscience-calmed — see here it is —
I hold it towards you. -
you can read mine if you like:
www.willowbywoods.com/category/poetry -
The reflection in my mirror affirms a deep jagged scar from left point of eye
across a furrowed brow, yet time has only healed its physical pain.
Cracked lips slightly thin and parched, coincide with my facial wrinkles that posses the qualities of being individually hand made by a craftsman and etched so perfectly with such precision so they could be strategically placed in positions that complimented the blemishes and scars brought about by my existence, these events served to legitimize this purpose, to map in my life experiences.
A broken front tooth makes a rare appearance when I find reason to smile, a wry look cast in alabaster, yet so soft and sincere a glimpse, it would inadvertently be misunderstood.
With my eyes I see this, with my eyes I see this image, with my eyes I see myself, but I am unable to see my eyes, to complete my portrait.
Title: Self Portrait
Written by: Joseph M. Fasciana
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