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You will probably think why should you add your link to this post if its to get a negative comment about your blog. Well in order to have a great blog, you need to know what should be changed to improve your blog.

You can visit my blog and judge it by yourself. All critique is welcome!
www.kiwipulse.com

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    1. Kiwipulse
      - It's not easy to navigate on your blog because you don't have a navigation bar. If I visit your single page, I need to hit the back button in order to go back to your homepage.
      - I see a scroll bar at the bottom of the page. I guess the length of your sidebar is long.
      - Do you have only one article? Because I don't see the rest of them. Maybe you should add 5 articles per pages.
      - Your blog is not bad, but I won't stay more than 2 minutes because of the reasons above.
  1. kopidunia
    Not sure I like all the bad stuff about my blog spelled out in public on BC, but since I've critiqued others' blogs here on BC I guess I ought to be humble and accept what others think about my blog too, so go ahead :-) www.kopidunia.com
    1. Kiwipulse
      - I spent a good time visiting your blog, the only thing I didn't like is the small text font on your left sidebar. I'm sure if you increase it by 1 it will look better!
    2. kopidunia
      Thx! I will look into that. It is a bit dependent on your screen resolution how "small" it really is but you may be right. I don't want my readers having to squint just to make out what my sidebar says.
    3. Kiwipulse
      My resolution is 1028x768 so on a bigger resolution, I will see nuts
    4. kopidunia
      Mine is 1280 x 1024 and I don't see any nuts :-) OK, I just changed the font but not the size. Should be better now...
    5. Kiwipulse
      It's up to you to change it or not. I'm just giving my advices on what I don't like. Anyways your blog look fine
  2. GatherSuccess
    sure my blog is at www.GatherSuccess.com ..... PLEASE COMMENT!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - The loading of the homepage is way too long. Maybe you should limit your posts to 5.
      - I don't like the subscribe's box and the block Blog status & awards, Everything is out of the place. A little organization will be appreciated!
      - Your Make Money Online Today with GatherSuccess's link should not be linked, you refer it to your homepage.
  3. MiLan
    'kiwipulse' frankly speaking, I logged third time to look for thread that ask to critique.

    Look at my blog and say how you feel.

    I also urge other members, who have posted in this thread and will be posting, to tell me what you didn't like.


    [webreview-milan.blogspot.com]
    1. Kiwipulse
      - You don't really have a navigation bar, what I see it a tabbed content bar.
      - The labels that link to your categories pages is it for the above post or the next post? I can't figure it out.
      - There are too many posts on the homepage, limit it to 5-7 posts, so we can reach your sidebar again!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - You have a photoblog which you have lot of pictures on the same page. It affect your loading and that include the huge picture on your background!
      - When I click your pictures, it redirect me to your flickr page. I'm not really visiting your blog, but your flickr page! Make it open on a blank page. There are many plugin for photo blog available for wordpress. Check it out!
  4. netboy
    thx ! al lot i m making the changes !
  5. moneyrush
    OKay game, Here is my blog.

    earneasymoney-moneyrush.blogspot.com/

    Thanks.
    1. Kiwipulse
      - Your Buzz sponsors banner is stick together, so I see a big banner flashing all over the place. Make some space between them.
      - You should organize your sidebar a little bit. For example the long banner of google Adsence. I can see a huge space on the left. You can use a smaller banner. Google have thought about it and its now avaialble!
      - I won't say much about your blog, you just started blogging. I wish you a good luck on the blogsphere!
  6. vickyonfire
    Take a look at my blog - outpersonals.blogspot.com & speak the truth
    1. Kiwipulse
      - 1,2,3,4,5,6.. I'm not counting the sheeps jumping over me. I'm counting the loading time that take me to load all your posts!
      - There are too many things on your sidebar that when I try to scroll down, it froze my navigator for 10 secondes. Are you trying to crash my computer?
      - Limit your post to 5 on your homepage, also if you have too many stuff on the sidebar then you should up for a 3 column theme!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - It look like hundred of blogspot that I visited until now. Nothing special to say. Maybe make your blog look a little bit unique?
  7. MiLan
    'vickyonfire' congiure your blog for three column templte. To get one visit my blog.
    1. Kiwipulse
      - I really don't know what is your latest post, it's separated on so many categories!
      - If I scroll down the page, I see more thing in your sidebar than the right side. It Should not be normal for a blog.. What do you think?
      - Ah finally I found your latest posts..at the bottom of the page! Hurra!
      - Center your stuff on the sidebar because I don't like to read it as a text.
    2. PureBlogic
      Well Matt I guess all of the success you've had in marketing sites could be improved by setting up your site better :-)! LOL! LMAO! I wonder what Kiwi would think about John Chow's site! This review is really funny!
    3. bittertruth
      very true, it's higgledy-piggledy
  8. nplbjirel
    positivensuccess.blogspot.com

    Positive and Successful Life, motivational, inspirational, personal development, self-help, success, self-development, confidence, life style, positive thinking, leadership, relationship tips
    1. Kiwipulse
      - I see feedblitz email box and feedburner email box. Have you decided which one to choose yet?
      - Your post "Carnival of Inspiration and Motivation: Fifth edition" is too long! Are you trying to win the longest post? You should put a more tag!
      - Your blog is lack of design, a header banner okay but the rest stay a white page. Also change the black text on your header banner. I can't read it
      - Your "Most Popular Posts" on the sidebar need more space. You should put it on the right side!
    2. nplbjirel
      Thank you Kiwi,

      I am thinking of using the feedburner. But, I can';t customize the feedburner form.So if I can do so, I definitely will be using feedburner.
      I am also thinking of decreasing the lenth of post especially when publishing the carnival edition.
  9. adjei7
    Well Kiwi, It looks like you're gonna be bogged down with all these people asking you to check their blogs. But I'm gonna put mine here anyway. Let me know what you think.

    www.thekexperience.com
    1. Kiwipulse
      - I don't see anything I don't like. Great blog!
  10. GratciaNulis
    Hi, yep...maybe you'll find a lot you don't like about and help me make it likeable...hm-hm...but be gentle, please....this is my 1st tryout blog, so.... be gentle...please..

    gratcianulis.blogspot.com
    1. Kiwipulse
      - I can't read your posts, its not in English. So I will say nothign about it.
      - Too many stuff on the sidebar, but overall the loading seem okay!
      - Just limit your post to 5-7 post on your homepage.
      - The second picture on your "What Time Is It?" need more pixel.
      - Take off the Bloggers Unite! 12.17.07 is last month! Are we still in 2007?
    2. GratciaNulis
      Wow, thank you! Thank You!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - First I think a 4 column is too much. Do you really need a 4 column? You have lot of room in your right sidebar.
      - Well Your left sidebar need to be center.
      - Change the color of the text on the right sidebar. Something more light svp.
  11. PetLvr
    Hi kiwi.. you're doing great on your first impressions What are your impressions about the new network template I've been placing? It could be any of the BattlingForHealth.com blogs ... (this just aggregates all the posts automatically)

    Notwithstanding the content .. see anything that could be improved with the template // thanks.
    1. PetLvr
      I forgot to convert the Hearing, MS, and Schizo blogs .. I'll probably get around to doing that this weekend. it's been taking time, adding unique codes and scripts to each template.
    2. Kiwipulse
      - I don't like the purple color on your sidebar link. It tell me "Don't click on it or something will happen to you".
      - I don't like the feedburner stat at the bottom of the page, it seem not important to you that I subscribe to your blog.
      - Can we have a navigation page? I don't know how to come back to the homepage. Is it the end of the visit? Something tell me "You are stuck on this page if you want to be free again. Close this page..Do it".
  12. Kiwipulse
    It seem I have no more blog to review, I will do it tomorrow. You are welcome to add yours!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - It's hard to tell, its a very simple blog. The post is too long, but you don't have much content. So it doesn't affect the loading.
    2. monkeytale
      lol...I do have the tendency to post long entries but there's over 10 months of content there.
  13. PetLvr
    - That's interesting about the purple, that didn't occur to me (I just matched the content link colors)

    - Feedburner .. I know, I know - 5 subscribers looks lame I've been debating on moving these to a central page for my secret viewing pleasure.

    - The navigation is at the top of the page. You can jump to any blog at any time from any where. Clicking on the HART-Empire head or the title of the blog always gets you to the home page. I thought that was obvious with how all blogs in the world should be. // I do need to improve my 404 error page. Right now I put a cartoon, and was thinking of linking up links to popular posts, posts made 1 year ago today, related entries, etc ..

    Thanks for quick review! I value your opinion and will at least start with the sidebar purple reconsideration and css. Maybe rename "Site Pages" to "Navigation" and add a link to the home/start page too.
    1. Kiwipulse
      I see now, I though first the navigation on the top is link to your blog network. Yeah make your page more friendly. I'm nuts when I visit a blog, I don't want to deal to figure out where is everything
  14. Shankerbakshi
    The Miscellaneous Ramblings of a dot Com Guru
    www.shankerbakshi.com
    1. Kiwipulse
      - I don't like the content on your footer. There are enough room to put it on your sidebar, why choose to place it at the bottom?
      - Too much google ads on the sidebar, I hope for you that people click on it for putting there!
  15. beinki
    Please tell me your thoughts. beinki.blogspot.com
    1. Kiwipulse
      - It took me 15 secondes to load only your sidebar. So I can guess you have too many stuff loading at the same time.
      - I don't feel to read your posts because its too short.
  16. Majik
    Why not

    majik2903.blogspot.com
    majiksworld.blogspot.com

    I hope there isn't too much you don't like
    1. Kiwipulse
      Majik's Thoughts
      - I don't like to see the stuff on the sidebar, organize it to make it look more attractive.
      - The blog look simple, I guess you just started blogging.

      Majik's World
      - It look better than Majik's Thoughts, but you have only one post per page. I don't like to click Older Posts everytime to see your latest posts.
      - I don't like the large google ad at the end of the page. Make it fit the page.
      - You need to organize the sidebar too.
    2. Majik
      Thanks for your thoughts on both of my blogs. I've only been blogging for almost 4 months. I've been trying to organize the my sidebars, can't quite figure out what would work best, any suggestions?
    3. Kiwipulse
      The best advices I can give you, try them all! Every blog is different, some can work for your blog and some not.
    4. Majik
      Okay, I've made some changes, not a lot but some, hope you'll come back in the future to check them out. Thanks again!
  17. petitehye
    I have two blogs. Hope you'll check both of them

    spaceofreality.blogspot.com
    entry4cash.blogspot.com
    1. Kiwipulse
      spaceofreality.blogspot.com
      - You blog looks fine, there are just too much ads on the sidebar.

      entry4cash.blogspot.com
      - I don't like to see all the google ads, I can feel that you made this blog only for make money with adsense.
      - I don't see any recent post widget on your sidebar, so I will not stay more longer than 2 minutes.
  18. genopianist54
    mine please (^^,)
    spicyartinfridge.blogspot.com/ fresh from blogger

    and the old one
    chroniclesoftrisna.blogspot.com/ d^_^b
    1. Kiwipulse
      spicyartinfridge.blogspot.com
      - First, I will close my navigator right away when I heard music on a blog. It annoy me and can't concentrate reading your posts.
      - I can see your a fan of BC I see all their widgets. You should center all the stuff on the sidebar. Also remove the one that you don't need or give you any good results.
      - I don't like to see the small google ads on the top of the post. Make it bigger and blend it with the design.

      chroniclesoftrisna.blogspot.com
      - Much better than your previous blog, but here again. The music make me want to dance than reading your post.
      - Center the stuff on your sidebar. Also remove the counter at the bottom. It flash my eyes.
      - I don't like to look at the pictures in your post, its not clear. You should resize it with photoshop.
      - I don't like the flashing ads at the bottom.
      - It up to you to make those changes. But take off the music plz
    2. genopianist54
      Thank you for checking out my blog
    1. Kiwipulse
      - The loading of your sidebar is too long, too much stuff. Clean it a little bit.
      - I don't like the square bar above your navigator bar. Is there anything that should show because I see nothing than a blank bar.
    1. Kiwipulse
      - Too many posts on the homepage. It affects your loading because you use pictures.
      - You don't have a navigation bar, so its not user friendly!
  19. bsd13
    Rip it up. And the rest of you too if you like, but send it in message as this is Kiwipulse's game.

    www.ablogaboutnothing.com
    1. Kiwipulse
      - The blog is lack design. They are many theme out there. Choose one more attractive. i won't say much, the blog is quite simple with some thing there and there.
  20. simonjjames
    Hello there, be interested to know your comments:

    simonjjames.blogspot.com/

    Simon
    1. Kiwipulse
      - The blog is not in English, so you really looking for international visitors. Can I leave now?
      - The background is black with a white font. Are you trying to make me blind?
      - Center your stuff on your sidebar!
  21. kevingoodman
    My blog is just a blog.
    1. Kiwipulse
      Ok roger that!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - Well you have been blogging since 2005, have you learn anything from all those years?
      - The blog is lack design, but you writing can be compensated.
      - Your sidebar doesn't attract me to click on it.
  22. morgantj
    I can't believe you are making me do this.

    www.travisjmorgan.com/blog/
    1. Kiwipulse
      - The design is simple, I like it when its clean.
      - After reading all your posts on your homepage, which took me 5 minutes. I became a more thoughful person. To be frank with you, I won't visit your blog daily because I don't know when you posted your latest post. I guess its a blog talking about your thought which is not a bad thing. I'm not really a fan of those kind of blogs.
      - I won't critique much about your blog, because there are nothing much.
    2. morgantj
      Interesting. I thought that by removing the dates, I might get more participation instead of less, especially on older posts. It seems that people are only interested in new posts, I reasoned that by removing the dates, I might get equal interaction on old and new posts. Thanks for the review.
  23. neobluepanther
    Since you seem to have run out of blogs, here is another one by me:

    neobluepanther.com

    And Thank you for checking out my blog earlier!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - I don't like the search bar on the top of your widget. Its out of the place.
      - I have nothing else to tell about your blog. Everything else looks fine!
  24. berryliciousme
    Please tell me how to improve my blog.

    elaine.renable.org

    Thanks a lot!
    1. Kiwipulse
      - Well, the design is dark and futurist. If the text could be more light, White for example. I will be more enthousiast to read your post. The yellow link attract me too much and I can't focus on your post.
  25. BlogBadly
    blogbadly.com

    As for your blog:

    -Overall great design. Looks very friendly.
    -Header is just a bit plain.
  26. deepti15
    allaboutparenting.blogspot.com
    Need suggestions and help if anything is missing.
  27. kingnutin
    www.my.opera.com/kingnutin

    you'll probably have a long list
  28. simonjjames
    Hi, I'm surprised at your comment:

    Kiwipulse?
    - The blog is not in English, so you really looking for international visitors. Can I leave now?

    For simonjjames.blogspot.com/

    Are your browser wrong or something? Can you elaborate?

    Thanks,

    Simon
    1. Kiwipulse
      hehehe, I have probably mixed up with 2-3 blogs when I did this review.
  29. naren
    hehehe here i am techtreak.com dont say about loading coz i know its too slow

    Thanks in advance

    bytheway your blog also loads too slow man! maybe due to the images try to compress your css file it may help a bit!
    1. Kiwipulse
      I won't compress my pictures, I can afford it with my dedicated server.
      The loading is okay in Firefox, in IE is crazy I know but 95% of my visitors use firefox. Why should I change it.

      Maybe I should switch my pictures to another server only for pictures.. anyway 3-4 secondes on the loading is not that bad.
    2. naren
      i said tocompress your css n not the pictures
    3. lupideloop
      how do you compress the css?
  30. lupideloop
    Hi Kiwi, care to go through mine again...
    I know you checked it out a few months ago...
    lupideloop.blogspot.com/
  31. adypellegrino
    Please tell me how to improve my blog.
    1. Kiwipulse
      What is your blog? I will review it tomorrow.
  32. donssite
    I am new at Blogging, so be gentle.

    road-safety.blogspot.com/

    Thanks,

    donssite.com learning to liftright.net at ezee.ca
  33. katchup
    Oh yes! say something here.
  34. tweakmonkey
    veganbot.com/
    I admit I didn't spend a lot of time on the template yet.
  35. SomewhereElse
    Well, I am married so very used to being told I am wrong etc, so why the hell not! Do your worst you slanty eyed fiend! hehe.

    theinsanityofsy.blogspot.com
  36. nhuong
    ooouhh ouh do me do me!!!! www.TheAsianEconomist.com
  37. Anok
    OK, I'm game, Identity Check

    I will say from the get go, I need to rearrange my side bar and get rid of some stuff. I've simply been too lazy LOL.
  38. Anok
    Er, sorry, that link didn't work. Lemme try again (I'm not used to this format)

    identitycheck-anok.blogspot.com
  39. deepti15
    I'm also interested in getting my blog reviewed .
    I requested but seems my comment is not there.
    allaboutparenting.blogspot.com
  40. imaniceperson
    I'm honored to have the chance to be reviewed by someone whose server crashed because they got so many hits one day in the past. I could definitely use some of your design advice.

    www.ImaNicePerson.com

    Have a NICE day!
    1. RobertDi
      your too funny
    2. imaniceperson
      Thanks, I'd like to be funnier but I wouldn't want to destroy our brand identity to our millions of viewers. Well actually, our thousands. Okay, you got me....our 10's to 20's.
  41. faqvideo
    Please have a look at mine, www.pl8s.org.
  42. gosmelltheflowers
    Hi,

    We're always open to critisicm. www.gosmelltheflowers.com/blog
  43. AmyWeber
    You better be nice...lol
    blog.amyweber.net
  44. positivemind
    Mine is still a baby...go easy on it..

    freemusiclyricsandvideos.blogspot.com

    You can include both good and bad points about it.

    Thanks!
  45. Kowgirl
    I have a new one I would like some feedback on.

    I-know-Did-You-Know.blogspot.com
  46. Daldianus
    Ok, here's mine ...

    bloggingthent.blogspot.com

    Thank you!
  47. michaelcheah
    Haha.. too many blogs for you?

    www.MichaelCheah.com
  48. myroslimh
    how about mine
    www.roslihanip.com

    your comments are most welcome
  49. GF1124
    New to BC and new to blogging generally. Be gentle with me!

    viewsofafan.blogspot.com/

    Thanks.
  50. bittertruth
    seems overflooded with blogs to review..
    she needs to setup an office to review all these blogs ha ha ha ha
  51. semmyw
    you can see my blog at www.semmyw.com
  52. janethvicy
    I am just new to this field, blogging. So i know i am that good yet. But still want to know your comment on my blogs..Thanks

    vicy-lifeisdifficult.blogspot.com/
  53. nhuong
    I think wiki is tired....we exhausted her. sorry wiki
  54. peacebella
    Hi Kiwi, Hope to hear from you as and when you are ready for a comment on these. Thanks!

    www.peacebella.com/
    www.moneysick.com/
    www.peaceinspire.com/
    www.peaceinspiration.com/
    www.peacemotivate.com/
    www.yrmanna.com/
  55. rsa17
    this is my blog:
    Affiliate Programs to monetize from your website/blog & Shop Online

    affiliateshoponline.blogspot.com

    Discuss topics, articles, affiliate marketing programs, strategies, reviews of products and

    companies, online shopping, etc... to provide readers information on how to monetize from their

    own website and blogs.
  56. aleare
    Take a look to my Blog:
    desdealgunlugardebuenosaires.blogspot.com

    and this is the feed:
    feeds.feedburner.com/DALBA

    Thanks!
  57. bipolarchick
    I welcome the opportunity to improve. Tell me what you think about my blog.

    blog.bipolarchick.net
  58. ursobranco
    I have a bunch of blogs about my new life in Brasil. It would be great to get some comment on what you think of them. My blogs come in English and in Portuguese. However the Portuguese translations are not complete.

    Check out my blog "A List of our Blogs about Brasil" at

    ourbrasilblogs.blogspot.com/

    Pick any blog, even this one, and comment. I am really partial to some of them such as The Great White Bear and Canadian Brasilian Recipes.

    Cheers
    That Pleasant Gentleman

    Urso Branco
  59. hepp2
    very nervously, he presented his two week old blog: india-fund.blogspot.com/

    for your perusal!
  60. Kiwipulse
    come on guys I don't have much time to review all these blogs as to write regularly my posts. Sorry, thread closed! Out of service! BANG!
  61. arvindsolid
    haha...a person who loves criticism from a closed service,,
  62. GratciaNulis
    Hi...wow, just found this OLD (^^,) thread, anyway, what about now, could you please tell me what you don't like about my blog, ow... caveat, it is still in bahasa Indonesia (^^,)

    gratcianulis.blogspot.com
    1. Shankerbakshi
      How About if I answer your Quarry - Can I KIWI ?

      Your Blog Header is not conventional one - I have not come across a header like this in recent time - So that can give a disadvantage and onlooker may consider it as a big Google AdSense Ad on the right though its a Site name Header. Can you do anything about it. Everything else is fix beautifully.
  63. kickdrum
    My site is www.celebritybloghog.com/
    Be brutally honest!
  64. wardenwells
    Do tell.

    www.wardenwells.com

    And don't just say it's ugly, because I already know that.
  65. timethief
    It looks to me like kiwipulse posted this thread on 1/19/08
    and that he has not posted to the thread again since 1/23/08.
    1. wardenwells
      Aw crap. lol
  66. kashifmahmood
    Here is the link : www.kashifblog.com

    BTW you have a nice blog
    1. timethief
      It looks to me like kiwipulse posted this thread on 1/19/08
      and that he/she has not posted to the thread again since 1/23/08.
  67. bestwidgets
    moneybush.blogspot.com

    My blog sucks in internet explorer. So don't even think about it.

    Non-IE users: I just made this blog a few days ago. Let me know what I can change. Does it look like their is enough going on at my blog. Do you feel like you can get involved?
    -John

    moneybush.blogspot.com
  68. benmaxime
    Great idea. Mine is: www.ben-lang.com
    What do you think?

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