Hello,

At the moment, I recently started with a new story. I already named it simply Tyberthia: the Divine Wars.

It is a fantasy game, but unlike the recent Tolkien lookalikes due to the popularity of Lord of the Rings movie trilogy, I'm not using Elves, Dwarves, Orcs or any of those races! No the six races are somewhat, at least I hope, unique: The Humans (can't get around those), The Shades, the Iru'sei, the Nymphs, the Darkened and the Undead. With three Gods: Iruson, Garsna and Ensidia. The story will follow the tale of all the races as he make their way throughout Tyberthia.

I recently started with chapter one named Arusla's Revenge. (Arusla already being my favourite character!) This chapter will revolve around the Darkened and from what I posted on the forums, you are to get a nice description on how they look. At least I hope you do!

I eagerly anticipate feedback on writing style and the story as it shows at the moment. Corrections on grammar and/or spelling shall be all to welcome and greeted with kindness.
(Spelling: British)

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