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"Memorioes" was an exercise in POV and incorporating the senses. The only editor who expressed an interest in publishing the story said it was too long. :) I should mention that the stories on my site are listed in chronological order, oldest to newest.

January 22nd 2009 - Shout-to-Shout

Choosing the right point of view is something I struggle with, too. In fact, I often write the same story using multiple POVs until I find one I like. It's a good thing I write mostly short shorts. :) You can read some at www.jimharringtononline.net.

January 21st 2009 - Shout-to-Shout

Hi. Loren. Thanks for the note and your comments on my site. I went back to your site to remind me which one it was. I visited a few today.:) I enjoyed reading the posts about your dad and cat. I didn't read to critique, but watch the verb tenses. It's a problem I have to watch also. Good luck.

January 21st 2009 - Shout-to-Shout

keep visiting my blog

November 30th 2008 - Shout-to-Shout

thanks to add me also

November 27th 2008 - Shout-to-Shout